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Should I Confess? .::S. Korea::.

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Request by ~YukiIronhand

~~ = Change of P.O.V.s [ Third Person Only ]

---- = Change in Day times

~*~*~*

"Should I tell you that I love you?
Do you know how I feel when I look you everyday?"


---

There she was. The most perfect girl in all of the school. Im Yong Soo stared at her from afar, like he always did, hoping that one day [Name] would fall for him as well. He loved everything about her. The way her [h/c] swayed from side to side when she walked, the way she acted in class, her wonderful, apple-cherry scented hair. Even her serious, yet careless, personality made him attracted to her! His heart beat rapidly for the innocent girl, even if she may have not noticed. Yong Soo wanted her all to himself, and he would do whatever he could to have her.

There was always one problem to his plan; Rejection.

[Name] laughs at his jokes and smiles her sweet smile at him every day! Why should he be worried about her rejecting him? Yet..

Yong Soo's thoughts were interrupted as something tapped his shoulder. He blinked and turned around, coming face-to-face with Xiao Chun[1]. He had a look of amusement plastered on his face.

"What do you want, Xiao!? I was in the middle of deep thinking!" Yong Soo pouted at his younger, but older, brother. Xiao Chun smirked and motioned towards [Name].

"Gawking at the totally poor girl from afar, I presume? You do know that, like, she could totally get a restraining order from you, right?" Yong Soo groaned and slouched over in a hunch.

"Don't remind me, bro.." Xiao Chun chuckled and patted his back.

"Don't, like, worry about it, Yong Soo. Just go up to her and, like, totally ask her out." Yong Soo shot his "younger" brother a crazed expression.

"Are you kidding me!? What if she says no, huh? Am I supposed to shrug it off like I didn't get rejected by the most prettiest girl in school?!" He shook his head furiously, gaining a laugh from his "younger" brother.

"I mean, like, there's a bunch more guys waiting to totally ask her out. If you don't totally get to her first, then, like, someone else totally will." Yong Soo puffed his cheeks and waved his arms about in a crazy manner.

"Stop reminding me, Xiao!! Let me work this out, I can do it for sure!!" Xiao Chun stiffled a laugh as he motioned to behind his younger brother. Yong Soo blinked and turned around, only to see the beautiful [Name] standing there, giggling. His cheeks flushed a bright red color as he put his arms behind his back quickly. "H-Hi, [Name]!!" She giggled again before waving.

"Are you okay, Yong Soo? You seemed to be having a seizure with your arms, from what I saw." She giggled again. Yong Soo rubbed the back of his head nervously.

"Y-Yeah, I-I'm fine, [Name]..D-Don't need to worry about me, no sirrie[2]..Hehe.." Oh how did he love the sound of her voice. It was like a thousand angels singing through his ears, much like the girl from one of his favorite Korean dramas. The bell ruined the moment as it rang through Yong Soo's ears. [Name] almost jumped and looked around, the hallways soon beginning to crowd with people.

"Oh shoot! I gotta get to French class! I'll see you later, Yong Soo!" And with that, [Name] ran off in the opposite direction of Yong Soo. He stood dumbfounded for a moment before being brought back to reality by a slap across the head. He rubbed where he was smacked and turned around to see Wang Yao, his older brother instead of Xiao Chun. Yao had an angry look on his face, much to Yong Soo's surprise.

"What is it, aniki?"

"You're going to be late, aru! You better get to class instead of daydreaming about [Name] all day!" Yong Soo sighed and nodded.

"You're right..But, aniki, she's just so-"

"Perfect? I know that, aru. But put your priorities before your love life, aru. School work before girls. That's what mama always said, aru." Yao spun on his heel and walked down the hallway to Art class, leaving Yong Soo in the hallways alone. Yong Soo sighed again and slouched over, walking to Math with a bored expression on his face.

~~~

You looked up at the clock once more in the past five minutes. The minute hand still hasn't hit the '10' mark! You groaned in your head, hoping the time would go faster. French class today was boring. You watched a video on Normandy and then you had to start your vocabulary for Chapter five[3]. At least this chapter seemed interesting, it was food. Your favorite thing in the world! The bell rang sharply and you let out a sigh of relief. Thank god it was Friday, you didn't think you could last another day in this school! You hurried out of French class, down the hallway, and up the stairs. You were excited for Science class for two reasons. First, you were going online to make a roller coaster.[4] It was all about Potential and Kinetic energy. Second, you got to see your long time crush, Im Yong Soo. You felt your face flush a bright red at the thought of him. He was just so irresistable! The way he smiled, the way he spoke to you, the way he stood up for you against bullies; He was just the perfect man! Your thoughts were interrupted from a hard jab on your arm.

"Ow!" You rubbed your arm vigorously and looked at the culprit, only to see nobody there. You blinked in confusion and turned your head the other way, seeing Yong Soo standing there with his goofy grin. You playfully poked his arm back and smiled at him. "Well, that was a nice 'Hello'." You both laughed and walked into the classroom together.

-----

You groaned in frustration as you shook your computer screen for the fifth time.

"Why won't they stop crashing into that thing at the end!?" Yong Soo laughed and patted your back.

"Its alright, [Name]. You'll get it sometime!" You pouted and stared at Yong Soo's screen.

"And how many times have you succeeded?"

"..Around three times.." You immediately threw your head on the desk.

"I'm never gonna get this done unless I go home and finish it.." You sighed and picked up your head, pouting and going back to your roller coaster mess.

~~~

Yong Soo quickly rummaged through his binder, trying to find a piece of paper and a pencil. He wanted to confess to [Name] today, and today only. If it didn't work, then he'd just give up on her for sure. He finally found his grip on a stray paper and an almost broken pencil. He hid the paper from [Name] as he wrote quickly, yet rather sloppily, on the paper. After he was done, he folded it up about six times and shoved the pencil back in his backpack. He tapped her on the shoulder and once she looked at him, he slammed the paper in her hands.

"Don't read it until you get to your locker and you know nobody is around you!" [Name] gave him a confused look and opened her mouth to speak until her thoughts were interrupted by the final bell. Yong Soo shot up out of his seat and to the destination of where the paper told her to meet him.

'I'm going to confess today..Rejection or not, it has to come off of my chest..'

Yong Soo strode confidentally towards the back of the school, a joyful aura following him.

~~~

You sighed and logged off of your computer.

"What was that all about?" You stuffed your stuff into your backpack and made your way to your locker. Once you were there, you immediately put in your code and opened it. None of the girls that were originally around you were there, so you could read the note without haste. Slowly opening the note, you smiled softly at the words written sloppily on it.

Dear [Name],

Meet me in the back of the school once you finish your visit at your locker! Don't bring any of your friends! Just you! Its a secret meeting, basically..So don't tell anyone!

Your best friend,
Im Yong Soo


You giggled and folded the paper back up, shoving it in your back pocket.

'I wonder what he even has to tell me..'

---

You walked out of the double doors and saw Yong Soo across the street, playing with a rock. He didn't see you come out of the doors. You smiled and skipped merrily over to the Korean boy, a goofy smile plastered on your face. Yong Soo picked up his head and blushed a deep red.

"O-Oh! [N-Name], you actually came.." You smiled and played with your backpack straps.

"Why wouldn't I? You ARE my best friend, aren't you?" You giggled as he looked at the ground in embarrassment.

"O-Oh yeah.." He coughed into his fist and looked at you with a worried, yet serious, expression. You blinked at the sudden serious look he was giving you.

~~~

Yong Soo vowed to himself that he'd do it. He wouldn't chicken out, he wouldn't back down; Nothing. He needed to do this, even if it killed him. Without thinking, Yong Soo quickly took [Name]'s hands in his. Her hands were tiny compared to his! He took a deep breath, soon finding his way to her beautiful, joy-filled [e/c] orbs.

"[Name]...I.." He blinked before squeezing his eyes shut tightly and almost practically yelled at her. "I-I love you, [Name]!!" He kept his head bowed and his eyes kept shut, awaiting rejection. No words came. Yong Soo shook in fear a little before opening one eye and looking up at [Name]. She had a sincere, a truly beautiful, smile on her face. She looked as if she was about to cry.

"Yong Soo...Why didn't you tell me earlier?" He opened his other eye in shock and blinked at the girl in front of him.

"W-What..?" She giggled at him before wiping her eyes with her arm.

"I love you too, Yong Soo..Why didn't you tell me earlier that you felt the same?" Yong Soo couldn't believe his ears. [Name] was confessing back towards him, telling him he should've done it sooner? This is like a dream come true!

"[Name]..I didn't think you'd like me that much.." She laughed and pulled him into a hug.

"You silly boy, of course I would! No matter what you do, we'll always be friends, right?" Yong Soo blinked before smiling warmly and hugging [Name] back.

"You just made my day, [Name].." All was fine until there was a loud shutter noise. They both pulled away and looked for the culprit. There he was; Xiao Chun. Yong Soo gritted his teeth and began to chase him around the basketball courts. "Xiao, you better get your darned butt back here or else!!" Xiao laughed and shrugged at his little brother.

"Or else you'll do what? Kiss her next?" [Name] flushed a bright pink color at the remark, causing Yong Soo to chase faster after his "younger" brother.

~*~*~*

"I can't live one day without you..
I only love one person
The person I love is you..."
WOOPS SORRY I USED THEIR NAMES TOO MUCH WOOPSIES~ :iconsuperderpplz:

What a bummer. :|

So, this was a request from ~YukiIronhand :heart:

1,941 Words, 5 Pages, Open Office Word 2.6

Dude...
This seemed short and STUPID. D:<
I'm sorry if it sucks, I swear ; A ;

Tehe, I like that Korean song. You should listen to it. >:3
Does the story fit with the lyrics? Huh? Huh?
DOES IT?!
.. c:
I just want to know so I know not to suck as hard next time I write a story. :iconderpplz:

:bulletgreen: :bulletgreen: TRANSLATIONS && UNDERSTANDINGS :bulletgreen: :bulletgreen:

[1] Xiao Chun: It's Hong Kong's name, just without the first part. :XD: [link] Even read it at the bottom! I chose this name 'cause it sounded FANCY. .w.

[2] Sirrie: Pronounce it "SIR-ree" xD

[3] Normandy && Chapter 5: Yup yup, that's what we did in French class on 11/11/11. :XD: Chapter 5 is ALL about food and I'M EXCITED. >: D Mont Saint Michel looks like the village in Tangled...

[4] Roller Coaster Online: MY GOD. THIS IS THE HARDEST THING I THINK YOU WILL EVER EXPERIENCE. [link] TRY TO GET 1,700 POINTS ON A SUPER COMPLEX COURSE AND TELL ME ITS NOT EASY. D:<

:bulletpurple: :bulletpurple: CREDITS :bulletpurple: :bulletpurple:

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Should I Confess? (c) Soyu
Story Line (c) ~07181997
You (c) ~07181997 //shot The reader... ; w ;

I hope you like it! >u<
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princess-snow-wolf's avatar
Hong Kong sounded like Poland.... They should hang out together.